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The dialogue in this VN is bussin fr fr, finally some characters that talk like actual teens instead of giving major “how do you do, fellow kids” energy 💀 The writing is lowkey carrying the whole game, gonna keep tabs on the updates

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Hi dears!

Many people complained about the jargon in the English version and stopped playing for this reason. Unfortunately, I don't do adaptations and translations, it is done by enthusiasts. Today the Russian translation is finished, it should be more original, as this time it was strictly controlled. If there are those who want to do the translation, you can use these two versions (Russian and English) to get a better text. In the meantime, I will be asking for help from my acquaintances.

Thank you for your attention!

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I'm honestly in love with this vn. It has some great story telling so far with so pretty unique characters. I also found it pretty funny that the way they speak is pretty much my generations lingo lol.

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What future tags are you planning? Harem? ntr/sharing? pregnancy? futa/trans? femdom?

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Hi dear!
Possible future tags : harem and pregnancy ᓚ₍ ^. .^₎

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I will try this once I get free but I hope this has or get a harem ending. The vn looks good and I will rate it when I play it. 

All the best for future updates and take care. 

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The story is still in development, but would welcome your feedback •ᴗ•

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It took me 1hr 45mins to play thru. Honestly i really enjoyed the way they talk, it started a bit weird for me but I got used to it pretty quickly and the way dialogues are written made me smile more than I imagined it would. The relationship between characters is solid for me. I love the jokes and the openness when any of them talk. 

I play vns for the stories and this was an amazing start. I would like a walkthrough because like I said I just enjoy the story which is meant to be seen as the dev wanted to show. The action with consequences can be played without it but having a walkthrough given by the dev is always appreciated. 

It's a amazing start and I hope you don't give up on this vn. I am very interested to see where this story goes and I hope others find it just as interesting and amazing. 

If you need any advice or help I know a discord server where there are few devs and people who help others. You can join them if you want. The server belongs to another dev who created "CosyCafe" and they are all very friendly there. Also you can share your vn and it's progress there. 

I wish you all the very best and take care.

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Thank you very much for this detailed feedback. I'm glad you liked it. ( ˶ˆᗜˆ˵ )

I will definitely think about the "true ending" and other aspects. Knowing that people like this, I will try to find the strength not to complete the project ahead of schedule.

Thank you for the opportunity to provide technical assistance. Right now I have connections with other developers who help me in difficult times and answer my silly questions. For now, this is enough, but if they ever get tired of me, I will definitely write to you. (´• ω •`)

Have a nice day!

The Description looks Enticing and Good enough I Might be able to Enjoy this at a later Date( If more Updates are incoming) Considering that this is fresh Release, I will go back to this in the FUTURE I promise that.

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It's all right, I understand. Just don't force yourself  ദ്ദി(˵ •̀ ᴗ - ˵ ) ✧